OK so I've written this poem... I'm some what good at writing but you can be the judge of this one. Please tell me what you think.
Why
Why is all that goes through my head,
Why this pain hurts so much.
Why I trusted,
Why I loved,
Why…
Why is all that goes through my head,
Why this pain hurts so much,
Why I gave you my heart,
Why you ripped it into pieces,
Why…
Why is all that goes through my head,
Why this pain hurts so much,
Why I thought you were my world,
Why I thought you were my other half,
Why…
Why is all that goes through my head,
Why this pain hurts so much,
Why you replaced me,
Why you never called,
Why you were never there,
Why you were gone,
Why I felt like my world was falling,
Why I believed the lies,
Why…
**Miss. Maddie**
Thursday, June 26, 2008
Posted by Miss. Maddie at 12:29 PM
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5 comments:
pretty good.
i like poetry,
but im more into writing songs.
Thanks - I liked your poem :)
I think it would make a cool song.
^_^ This was pretty good poem, it's repentive and would sound good as a song.
that poem is awesome!! i write oems too. if yo uwant to check them out; from-her-heart-x.blogspot.com
they arent as good as yours though! ;)
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